OK, but short.
Its good for a first submission, however it was waaaay to short, keep learning and keep up the good work :)
Also, try using more characters next time.
OK, but short.
Its good for a first submission, however it was waaaay to short, keep learning and keep up the good work :)
Also, try using more characters next time.
Definitely more characters at some point! Story first though, to improve that length.
good, but.....
very, very, very strange. Very well animated. My only criticism is that the drawing style made it hard to see at one point, but apart from that very good, very surreal...
thanks, i'm thinking of making another. i'll clean up the style so it's clearer
Right. I'm an amateur artist, both flash and pencil, but mainly pencil. I'm always open to ideas and am willing to do artwork for anyone - just ask!
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